Week 6

Week 6;

We've now started work on our final magazine, as we've got our feedback and results from our draft.

Evaluating Feedback;

FAYEFRONT COVER –

HIGH 3

WWW

Looks conventional, eye catching and feminine colours, great photo model (MRSH)

EBI

Consider use of CAPS (Mrs H, Mr Smith doesn’t quite agree)

Find a better barcode,Put price and date by barcode? 

Not entirely happy with font for Masthead and Becky Orton 

Pixie not PIXEE

First look or first listen? Are full stops needed?

CONTENTS – HIGH LEVEL 2 

WWW 

Correct headings

EBITidy her hair (MRS H AND MR S)

Contents font annoys MR S (MRS H LIKES IT)

Features could be better

Alignment a big issue, looks scruffy, fonts all different sizes.

Buy a real pop mag and see what they do

DPS – High level 3

WWW

MRS H Loves the image, Mr S is still a bit fussy over the image, bit of a funny jumper.

House theme obvious

EBII 

KNOW YOU’VE MADE HUGE IMPROVEMENTS TODAY

Article needs improving

Think about alignment on the right

Include little details like photographer, makeup artist, hair stylist etc on the pic (maybe even a get the look box)

All of the photos will been changed as i'm going to do another couple of photo shoots, to try and get the right picture for my magazine. I'm going to work on the feedback i've had for the front cover and make the tweaks to it which needs doing. I'm going to completely changed the layout of my contents page, and add in a picture of someone different, to make it a bit more like a magazine. i'm going to re-write my article, and keep some of the questions i had originally and add some new ones.